All Comments on 'Day at the Lake'

A very good story from a talented author. This story was a very believable and enjoyable read. Please don't pay attention to the critics and naysayers that have nothing better to do than to attempt to tear down your work. However it appears that you have listened to the constructive criticism (your paragraphs are much shorter) no matter how blunt and that's good. Please keep up the good work. I look forward to reading much more from you. Judging from your previous stories your lovely wife has given you some wonderful material to draw from.

what is she a dog , wifey.

Looks like you have a few!

Thanks for sharing!

Not the normal type of loving wife story that appears on this site, pity there isn't more like this and less cheating and slut/whore stories. Thanks for the story.

It is nice to believe that there are marriages that are honest and mutually satisfying out there. Thanks for the read!

Thanks for sharing your Day at the Lake.

Loved it!

Thanks for sharing this adventure with us, keep going.

I love outdoor sex or just knowing someone might see us