All Comments on 'Day Trip'

Another winner with this one,JJ1. A turn on again , your imagination knows no bounds ( thank goodness), is there a continuation,it could do with another 2 chapters at least, to my mind that is ,but my mind is in my knickers when I read your writings,

J

John, all your stories are amazing, but this wasn't one of your best ones. It was too short. I enjoyed the humor of how the main character kept making mistakes (beleive me i can relate) but their wasn't enough buildup/introduction. We didn't even learn the characters names properly. That said, it was still really good, congratulations on another great storie.

Women giggle.

This story matches a fantasy I have about one of my coworkers--just perfect.

I just read this. The storytelling is incredible. The use of details, of excrutiating (sp?) slow motion, is never a turn off. It is am incredible turn on.

THANKS

Your listing of TAGS is useless. They need to be more than random words, they need to list the kinds of sex the story contains.