by Just_John1
Your listing of TAGS is useless. They need to be more than random words, they need to list the kinds of sex the story contains.
I just read this. The storytelling is incredible. The use of details, of excrutiating (sp?) slow motion, is never a turn off. It is am incredible turn on.
THANKS
This story matches a fantasy I have about one of my coworkers--just perfect.
John, all your stories are amazing, but this wasn't one of your best ones. It was too short. I enjoyed the humor of how the main character kept making mistakes (beleive me i can relate) but their wasn't enough buildup/introduction. We didn't even learn the characters names properly. That said, it was still really good, congratulations on another great storie.
Another winner with this one,JJ1. A turn on again , your imagination knows no bounds ( thank goodness), is there a continuation,it could do with another 2 chapters at least, to my mind that is ,but my mind is in my knickers when I read your writings,
J