All Comments on 'Day with Daddy'

Very sexy and done without the sex--We can pick up the story from there as we do ourselves

Thanks

Too much teasing here...

Will you continue the story? Please?

What a cute story ; just one of those things , you say one thing and it leads to another . Well done .

Top class story, cant wait for the follow up

FOR THE TEASE!!

just joking.

you're a big flirt. but i forgive you. i think your story is hot.

ok, now to the next chapter.

Screw DON whoever he is---It is a great story!!! Just hope you follow up with the rest of the story!!

Good writing, very nice dialogue. The move from light flirting to talking about sex was a little rough, a bit rushes, but otherwise it was a nice slide from familial to intimate.

hotttttttt!!!

it just doesnt flow right. she had on a top didnt she? and the bottoms, but they r concerned about the top but donot say what if anything it shows. and even tho im the last person who cares about speling normaly maybe because there is no flow or something missing the speling was or shoul i say misspeling was so ovios it just didnt work for me.maybe a rerite and an editer is all u need to have a great story.