All Comments on 'Daybreak Ch. 08'

The love scene left me panting... excellent! And I'm dying to know what Nadia has in store for us...

Loving It. It's such a cohesive story with a steady pace I don't pay attention to any mistakes you've made. I'm hard pressed to come up with any valid constructive critism. So I'll just continue to sit back, relax & enjoy. What's the Nadia's favor from Alexis? Curiousity is just eating me up.

you cant get the chapters out quick enough!! it flows and connects really well and i cant help but love it

I don't know what Nadia told Alexis, but I'm dying to find out. :) Great story, great imagination.

So glad they got their rocks off!! LOL! I thought they were going to kill somebody with all of that pent up tension! I just hope no one dies except Zaide of course!

She's either going to ask Alexis to sleep with her and get her pregnant. (Don't ask how I came to this conclusion or where it would take the story) or she is going to give Charisma to Zaide. I enjoyed this story. Looking forward to the next chapter.

After reading this chapter, *I* have a goofy grin on my face. I just love reading about them, and I'm extremely curious about Nadia's conversation with Alexis. Keep up the great work!

The sex was hot, but I liked the fact that they came together as a couple.