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Click here"Sure mom come on and join in" Devon said as she moved over to let her half naked mother kneel next to her, in between both her daughters.
Dean watched as she swayed over and joined the girls on the floor, this had just become much more exciting for Dean.
He increased the pace of his hand on his cock as he watched the now six breasts of his mom and sisters before him.
All were playing with their breasts now twisting and tweaking their nipples and rubbing the flesh around them, moans filled the room.
"Oh Dean you know you wanna cum on us so do it" Lindsay said as she let go of one of her breasts and stroked her brothers cock along with his own hand to work him up more, that worked.
"I'm almost there!" Dean said, the women too that as a sign and all lifted their breasts up and pushed them together, making nice long creases down the middle of them as Dean closed his eyes and aimed his cock at Lindsay.
She smiled and closed her eyes as she felt the first of her brothers blasts of cum hit her right on the forehead, she soon felt another hit her eye and begin to fall onto her breasts.
Dean opened his eyes and saw the cum on his sisters face and pool on her breasts, he quickly moved on to his mom, she had done this before and loved it, this time it was even more exciting.
She felt a blast of cum hit her lips as her son's cock bounced with each blast, he hadn't had sex since Saturday so he had built up a nice amount for them and that showed as he continued to shoot cum over his mom's breasts.
Next was Devon, she had her eyes closed as the cock of her brother spewed a glob of cum into her hair and then onto her face, she felt, like Lindsay, it slide down her face, leaving a thick trail of itself on her cheek as it slipped down onto her breasts with a splat.
Dean was almost done but did manage to cover all 6 breasts with a little more cum before he was totally spent.
All the women looked at their covered breasts and smiled at the cum that was slipping down their faces, it felt strange to have cum oozing on their skin nothing like water, it was much thicker and smellier.
It was Jenna who took the lead scooping up the cum off her face and offering her fingers to Lindsay who graciously accepted them into her mouth sucking off her brothers cum.
When her mom's face was clean she did the same followed by Devon until only their breasts were covered then Devon and Lindsay leaned their faces down and slowly cleaned off their mothers breasts licking the cum off with their tongue and savouring the salty taste.
Once Jenna was clean it was her turn to clean her daughters which she did with vigour her tongue getting in every place it could trying to find the last bits of her sons cum.
When they were all cleaned, up they laid on the bed together and cuddled, they'd have to go back to Literotica and find more ideas.
They waited for the 13 of the next month the day that Devon was due on her period it was an anxious wait for her, Lindsay Dean.
Then finally the day arrived, all three were on tenterhooks and were exited when her period was late.
There was an atmosphere of excitement in the house for the next few days but still no period.
"I've never been this late before" Devon said excitedly to Lindsay.
"Looks like you did it," Lindsay said hugging her teary sister and giving her a kiss.
"This is so great, just think what it's gonna be like, it's so wrong to have your brother's kid but its so exciting isn't it," Devon said as she wiped away some tears of happiness from her eyes.
Lindsay smiled and kissed her again "Just remember we'll all be here for you always".
After a few more days of waiting Lindsay bought Devon a home pregnancy test kit, Devon nervously went to the bathroom and did the test. When she came back out, she saw Dean and Lindsay waiting for her news.
She looked at them both individually and smiled before nodded her head, Lindsay and Dean rushed over to her and gave her a big hug.
Devon knew she had the full support of her family and that reassured her everything was going to be ok no matter what path their lives took, or what the future held in store for them.
After receiving some complains (all anonymous) about the way I used words in chp 1, I ask that if anyone wants to have a go at the way I write in my work. Firstly, consider that I'm English and talk different to most of you readers and secondly if you want to tell me how bad something is in my work, leave an address so I can write back. Don't always be so cowardly that you have to do it anonymously.
- COMMENTS
Anonymousover 5 years agoThat you are far more interested in quantity than quality. One could fill an encyclopedia with your spelling and grammatical errors. You are not an author, nor even a writer, just someone with a storyline that puts words on the screen with no concept of, or concern for, journalistic skills. I see where one individual has graciously offered assistance as an editor, PLEASE accept this offer and stop embarrassing yourself.
Decal_lastalmost 6 years agoI'm a Yank but I speak some of the Queen's English. I know you park by the kerb, your garden is the front area of the house where we have a lawn and you have lovely flowers. I know you put luggage in the boot as well as your foot, work on the motor under the bonnet which is not the one you where. I spent 5 years in East Anglia and the entire family loved our time there. I like the story but it would be so much better if you had an editor. It seems you get to writing and your mind is racing ahead of your fingers making words. I do. It leaves many misspelled words, omitted words, and sometimes continuity. Please consider one of the volunteers. I edit as Decal_last. Still like the series.
Anonymousalmost 13 years agoI cannot speak for anyone other than myself. With that said, I choose to speak anonymously because I do not choose to sign up for this site.
Also, I choose not to leave my e-mail address on a forum where just anyone can see it.
Again, with that said, in my earlier post from Chapter 1, you state that you are English. That is fine, you use use arse instead of ass (which by-the-way you never did). So therefore you speak English. I applaud you. However, there is a fundamental, definitional difference between the usage of certain words. For example, their, there, and they're. In one instance you used "their" when you should have used "they're" instead. It is basic, yet essential, grammar errors that can bring a story down.
Also, I mentioned in my anonymous comment from Chapter 1 that it is a good story overall. The endings of both chapters I have read thus far seem rushed.
The only other issue I had is when you interjected your personal thoghts into the story at one point which interfered with the point of view of the story.
That is why I mentioned seeing about getting an editor for your stories so that good stories can become great stories.
Now, if you don't like the fact that I decided to issue my comments anonymously, well, we are all entitled to how we feel and I begrudge you not for your feelings. However, I have criticized your works in a somewhat professional manner. While I understand it is still frustrating to read, espcially when I make a comment such as that the endings to your chapters feel rushed to me, it is a quantitative feeling, meaning that I cannot prove it is rushed, but it feels rushed.
Take what you desire from my comments, I can only hope that it in some way helps you to think about your audience when you write and like I mentioned above, make your good stories become great stories.
Anonymousabout 13 years agoHey, you can email me at laurenwhiting@yahoo.com with your stories for me to look over/edit if you'd wish. I love your stories and think they're fabulous and NO ONE is perfect when it comes to spelling and grammar, Mr. Anonymous. Even I have to use spell check and I consider myself the Grammar Goddess :)
But yeah, feel free to email me, even if it's just to share your latest work with me.
CQMSover 13 years agoI could not agree more with 'racefan91'.
I would go so far as to say that comments should not be accepted from the 'someone' or the 'Anonymous' subscribers.
If you are man or woman enough to leave a comment at least have the backbone to put your name to it.
I enjoyed all of the stories I have read so far and only wish I had half of your talent. As for the language I have no problem with English when it’s spoken (written) properly but then again I am Irish.
Because of my job, not having access to BroadBand, I download some stories to read at my leasure (MSOffice). Its interesting the number of spelling errors that crop up with the stories posted my American writers.
So keep it going my friend.
Gerry (Ireland)
racefan91over 13 years agoif you cant say somthing nice about a story soneone put alot more time into then it took you to read and complain about then put your name on it and stop hiding!.
