All Comments on 'Dear Diary, It's Nicky'

I like the idea of the diary submissions as a story format. I'm left a little confused as to where you were heading with this one. Was Nicki just super pissed off about the whole scenario or was she secretly a little turned on seeing her mother sucking her boyfriends cock? If she was turned on about it then perhaps she could've done something about it. ie. joined in, watched secretly, masturbated while retelling the story to her diary. If she was pissed about it perhaps she could've punished her boyfriend and/or her mother in an embarrasing way. Like I said earlier I really like the diary format so please don't take these comments negatively, just take the time to read through the stories a few times and think about how to add to them. Good luck with any future stories and do keep writing as I for one am looking forward to reading them.

stupid story why would nicky even think of getting a christmas present for johnny after what happened she would have kicked him out or told him since you like her so much keep nher because we are through and as for you mom i never want to see you or hear from you again then leave keep your stories realistic if i want a fantasy i will go that section

I really liked it alot and wanted more