All Comments on 'Dear Diary, It's Nicky's Mother'

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madengineer3madengineer3almost 17 years ago
Very Well Done Story!!!!!!

This story is from a highly unique angle. It is well crafted and keeps the reader's attention. I hope to read more of MHF11's writing.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 17 years ago
Why is she sorry?

IS she sorry she got caught? Is she sorry that she seduced a man other than her husband? Is she sorry that her selfish acts betrayed the trust of both her husband and her daughter? What about Johnny? He is not blameless in this escapade. He gave in to another woman's seduction. So how can the daughter trust Johnny again? Answer, neither Johnny nor Mom are trustworthy at this point. Frankly, the daughter and dad outta boot both the cheaters to the curb, sell the house, pocket the money and move to Italy. Why you ask??? Why not, they can always say sorry later.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
stupid

RE:"DEAR DIARY IT'S NICKY'S MOTHER"this chapter it totally stupid her mother writes a note and gives it to her boyfriend to put in her diary not going to happen when she caught them together that would have been the end of the relationship she would have kicked him out and never talked to him again so there would be no way he would be able to put the note in the diary try to keep it atleast sounding realistic

AnonymousAnonymousover 7 years ago
stupid

this is not incest and why give the note to her daughters boyfriend to put in the diary

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