All Comments on 'Deconstructing Stephen'

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AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Loved it

Would love to see follow up.

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Ha

Slapdown to her when he gets free. You can not beat a real man. I can think of several POWs right now. They are real men, not the gay types many have seen on TV.

flswitchflswitchover 15 years ago
Interesting ...

A number of options - he finally breaks, he doesn't change or he breaks her.

LordSlamdawggLordSlamdawggover 12 years ago
It was very wicked. All of it,yes indeed...

but that last endgame twist was DEMONIC !

AnonymousAnonymousabout 11 years ago
The glimpse you saw?

Was the determination to hurt you badly for all the assault, battery and rape you committed. You really think, in any fantasy or fiction, is ok to treat another human being like that? You belong in jail.

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
But when she returned?

He had indeed, gotten free. When she walked into the room,l he grabbed her. Forced her into the straight jacket, wrapped the chains around her and left. He wondered how long she last? Did the smoke get to her before the fire? You see, as he left he started the building on fire. By the time the fire dept got there the building was fully engulfed. He smiled.

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