All Comments on 'Delayed Honeymoon Pt. 01'

...waaaay too much backstory. Trim this by a third to a half and you have a well-written story.

Stevelee writes stories with sex in them. He gives background as to why a married woman ends up doing something completely foreign to her character. Much better that having her suddenly jumping in bed with no explanation. A long lead-in makes the transition believable . Otherwise, you have artificial sex with a story grafted onto it -- which is what the previous writer probably wants

I can't take one more story from this author and the absolute wimps he enjoys creating...... Not fair to keep reading this loser if I hate his cuck style.... 1*****

One of the best sensual and erotic stories ever. You painted an accurate picture of cruising and ports of call, along with keeping the reader visually a part of a wonderful story.