All Comments on 'Deli'

by PeggyBuxton

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aKindDev_MikeaKindDev_Mikeover 13 years ago
another wonderful story

Thank you very much for writing this. It is a wonderful story. If you want to develop further chapters, that could be interesting, or leave it as it is with a feeling of hope.

estragonestragonover 13 years ago
Needs a Good Copy Editor

Interesting concept. I don't like it, but that's just me. With all the troops maimed in Iraq and Afghanistan, voluntary maiming makes me sick. Anyway, you need a good copy editor.

AnonymousAnonymousover 13 years ago
Wanting more.............

You always write good stories and this is no exception but I want more please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
lovely

As usual, a lovely story. You certainly have the ability to vary your stories which means we don't get bored reading them.thanks for another good one!

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