by PeggyBuxton
Thank you very much for writing this. It is a wonderful story. If you want to develop further chapters, that could be interesting, or leave it as it is with a feeling of hope.
Interesting concept. I don't like it, but that's just me. With all the troops maimed in Iraq and Afghanistan, voluntary maiming makes me sick. Anyway, you need a good copy editor.
You always write good stories and this is no exception but I want more please.
As usual, a lovely story. You certainly have the ability to vary your stories which means we don't get bored reading them.thanks for another good one!