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by Ashley_Maddison

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jg2291jg2291about 13 years ago

It was good.. felt a little bit rushed. Maybe Ch. 2 should focus more on the back story to catch the reader up with the plot a bit?

Also, please don't make Lila go back to him so easily. I love a strong woman!

thischickthischickabout 13 years ago

It was a good slice of what could be a great story. Is this all?

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