All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 08'

The world you created feels real, you’re story lives. It is beautiful, thank you for sharing this with us.

Something tells me I will be hearing from dry opinion again.

P.S. liking the story.

THIS IS AWSOME also, neeka ( however u spell it) sounds like nigga

idk if it was intended but I find it funny, yea I'm black deal with it

The story is very well written. Logic, attention to details, good spirit and tenderness are the strong sides. On the other hand the story is slow, uneventful and not very sexy. That's my final comment, because I won't read the rest. Thanks to the author for inspiration.

The only raving trolls this author gets are the readers who wish she'd write faster. Keep up the good work... and where the hell is chapter 9?

Just when I was worried that ths story might also be winding down, you give it a new twist and a fascinating new character. I really enjoy your writing, in particular your sensitivity. Thanks so much!

you have created a facinating world and characters that are blossoming.

outstanding editing too!

Philip