All Comments on 'Demon Child Ch. 16'

So glad for a new chapter!!! I love your stories!! Thank you

Really loving this riveting well written story, I hardly ever rate stories five stars but if there were more I'd give them to this one. The whole landscape and peoples that populate it are very well thought out and convincing. Roll on the next chapters.

Can't wait for the next chapter

This chapter was wonderful, but still heartbreaking. You made me cry and when that happens, I know it's a good story. I just hopes this has a happy ending.

Loved the story but u should really write more,really write more