All Comments on 'Denial Ch. 06'

That stuff messed up man. YIKES !

Runs on kinda long, could be edited down. Not very plausible.

Next time you see on the news that the police have found a horribly mutilated body that has had the head, hands and feet cut off to prevent identification. Let us hope that it is the body of either the doctor or one of the other vicious cunts that she has mentored. Nuff said!

The writing was OK, but the forced disfigurement turned me off. Hopefully the rest of the series will be more like the first 5 chapters.

Personally I found this chapter very erotic; I just wish you had gone into greater detail. I would love to see a spinoff involving Shoshana and Steven. Very sexy what she did and just goes to show how much they love each other. I hope you'll continue this story someday.

I really have a very open mind. I'm not turned off by much. Incest, bestiality, S&M, group sex.... I find most perversions exciting. I did not like this one at all. I gave it a 2 for good writing.

This one just did not do it for me. The deliberate maiming of normal people takes it a bit too far into the realm of truly evil.

so apparently none of the 'masters' hold any affection whatsoever for their 'slaves'. remove their teeth? cutting out vocal cords? what a bunch of sick losers.

Someone should call the police on these assholes. lol...it's like reading something out of a Rob Zombie Horror movies. fucking disgusting

Would have enjoyed a spin-off centered around Steven and Shoshanna, or Trump and Tart.

Well, this chapter should have been reported as the extremes that have been inflicted on people have gone way beyond what I thought Lit would have allowed. I should have stopped after chapter four but now know that I do have to quit this line of pain. Too bad that there is not a zero to give this junk.