All Comments on 'Derailed Ch. 04'

I saw this relationship with Casey coming but still enjoyed the outcome. This was a delighful story that should have been a little fuller. The transition from Amelia to Casey was too quick. There was no great dilema for Garrett, and I also waited for more input from his benefactor.

What I do regret is that we know very little of Amelia, save that her reputation may not have been totally warranted.

Again, a very well writen story. The authors careful attention to details made the story come to life. I will be reading more of his stories.

Hello Uncle

As I have previously stated, my doubts about Amelia viz a viz carnivorous spider. what with sister Casey popping up and Garret popping up Casey. surprises all round, a really good story perhaps more could have been made of Garret /Casey copulation drawn it out a little longer type of thing, Lastly I truly like the idea of the two of them breeding, borne one and another on the way, simply stunning, makes me tingle at the thought.

Love Jem