All Comments on 'Desiree Wants Sex AND Love'

Mr. Grigor has taken an odd assortment of characters and crafted an interesting erotic tale. We follow his main character Desiree as she seeks to not only get laid; but, have love as well. A worthy goal!

it self is ok but it needs to be edited bad.

when i'd done reading this i went back to the beginning and started counting. there are at least three great stories waiting to be expanded here, possibly four, and i'm not sure why you tried to squeeze them into one frustrating tale.