All Comments on 'Desperate Measures Ch. 00: Prologue'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
Amd this guy graduated from Law School?

How is that possible? Everything he says or does makes him appear to be dumber than a stump. When your main character has the demonstrated IQ of a pea the story falls into the abyss. This was just silly. No stars.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
I wish

I wish I could find a pill like that, lol, Although I crossdress, I rarely can find a man that will fuck me like a common whore, At least with a pill like that I would have a real pussy to get filled and fulfill my wish of being used as a cunt ass whore slut,

continue your story, I will be looking forward to it. Diane

AnonymousAnonymousabout 9 years ago
it has potential

I think you are setting up a good foundation and I would love to see the story progress. I think you should make the main guy seem more intelligent since he has a collage degree in law. I would also like him to have a name.

AnonymousAnonymousover 8 years ago
Beautiful

Please, please write some more

Mosc47Mosc47almost 8 years ago
I definitely need more!

This story was way to hot to be abandoned. I see there have not been any additional chapters in a long time, but I keep hoping that the story will continue.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 5 years ago
Great start

This is a great start, just need the next chapters now. please.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 1 year ago

So a guy takes a pill to transform into a woman. He likes the idea guys are going to use him/her for gang sex. This could be interesting to see if he learns how to be more considerate towards women. Maybe he swaps gender for the girlfriend so she can have a bisexual lover.

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