by JakeRivers
This was a good story. It suggests Stevie had a premonition of the next day.
It's sad he never got off the ground and at least have a chance to fight back.
I was born in 1947 and at age 6 I can remember some of the stories told by the men who fought that war.
This does not only happen in times of war. Many "men", alive, will not own up to the responsibility of doing what they've done.
WAR IS HELL especially for those left behind, TK U MLJ LV NV
Unless you are going to have a miraculous saving of Steven's life, there is too much sadness in the world now. I love happy endings and do not like sad ones. Thank you.
What happened to Angie and Steven's Baby?
being a navy veteran myself i can see how something like this could happen.
good story
don
I love historical fiction, especially romantic historical fiction. Please expand on this story... I’d love to read it!
I'm beginning to think that you have lived a thousand lifetimes and are just spinning your wheels waiting for the next memory to come to fruition! Loved how you used the letters to convey Angie's love and loss.
Declan
Though perhaps a fantasy, there may be someone out there with a very near parallel experience. Good writing; tight, pointed, focused. Excellent.
There is definitely a lot you could do with this scenario. Good luck.
Nice work, Jack. Illustrates the horror of war at a very personal level. Good job.
That seemed like a lifetime of longing put into one wonderful little story.
I'm interested in seeing this story blossom into a story ripe with romance and drama.