All Comments on 'Diamonds In The Rough Ch. 04'

can't wait until the next chapter!

the end product is always greater than the all. TK U MLJ LV NV

those two are gonna b so shocked once they finally recognize what it is they're wandering towards to hihi

the dog is the star!!!

this is going to interesting to see how the dynamics work out can not wait for the next chapter

Nicely reversed roles and intriguing possibilities. First time I ever found myself following a gay male tale....

Bobby Vinton, he sucks. This story sucks, you suck.

I particularly like how you keep the characters true to their own natures. Major is a sweet touch, too.

the facets still have deep hidden faults. TK U MLJ LV NV

Interesting storyline. Look forward to the continuation of Lynn and Sam's adventure

Moster1, I've been following your writings since I read CW2. It just keeps getting better and better. This story is phenominal. I can't wait to see where it goes. Thanks for sharing your talent with the world.

am reely liking this story. Have to agree, like thedog too.

How did I miss this?

Great story!

Oh this is getting better and better.

I love love love this story so far. On to Chapter 5. *wink*

I'm really enjoying this so far. There's just one or two things, though, that seem a little hard to believe. One being the way Eric talked to Lynn. And in this chapter, the way Sam just dashed off to the bathroom to finger herself, and Lynn suddenly jerking off in Sam's living room.

But other than those two instances, I'm enjoying it very much.

These role-reversal type stories interest me, but unfortunately, they're pretty rare, or really crude and don't feel 'real'.