All Comments on 'Diamonds In The Rough Ch. 07'

by Mostera1

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donaldedonaldeabout 12 years ago
wow

Great chapter full of surprises looking forward to the next one

mokkelkemokkelkeabout 12 years ago

they took to the pregnancy like a fish to water, just wonderful.

these two really are a perfect match for each other

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Masterful

What you did with these characters is simply wonderful.

unbelievable. Can't wait for more!

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
AFTER THE CLEAVING AND SHAPING

still polishing the raw diamonds into A ????????, only time will tell. TK U MLJ LV NV

tazz317tazz317about 12 years ago
GENETIC MAKE UP

shows that diamonds are the hardest to comprehend. A poigant love amidst opposites. TK U MLJ LV NV

ambush184ambush184about 12 years ago
sorta saw this coming

but still a wonderful story told from a VERY different point of view. I certainly hope there's more to come. Thanks

kalamazoo707kalamazoo707about 12 years ago
Thank you

Thank you for this story... I love it and I am very happy for them! Looking forward to the next chapter and how they deal with a little one on the way!! Thank you for sharing

Kal

blunajanablunajanaabout 12 years ago
love it!

Thanks for this story. I simply love it.

nakdsubnakdsubabout 12 years ago
Damn! I hate to see this story end...

Only a writer of your caliber could pull off this subject matter in such a believable and tender way. Every chapter so far has received 5* from me and I guessing each future chapter will earn the same.

Fantastic story, fantastic writing.

bruce22bruce22about 12 years ago
What we expected from the begining

But it was a pleasure getting here and it is a pleasure seeing how the dialogue has been constructed... The inversions are spectacular.

MaddieKimMaddieKimabout 12 years ago
Ahh

You continue to amaze me.

MaddieKimMaddieKimabout 12 years ago
Clarification

It has come to my attention that my previous comment may be a bit ambiguous. This is to clarify.

I believe the author is doing an amazing job telling a very unique love story. Mostera1’s characters are staying true to their own personalities while opening themselves up to a different love than either expected. The story is unfolding with just the right amount of humor, love, and tension.

Great job, M1, I’m looking forward to the next chapter. ☺

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
Lovely

Such a tender transformation, not hurried but natural. Very unusual, but a lovely unique romance. Great job, looking for more.

nazari2964nazari2964about 12 years ago

Nice little surprise with the baby. You wrote the characters so well that I get lost in the story and don't remember the little twist. Nicely done. On to the next.

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