All Comments on 'Dirty Babymaking'

It's a pretty, loving story, one that I know has been played out for real. The thrill, the knowledge that this creates life.

Wow.

On the editing side, I think a little tightening up would do it more justice (there's an "of" instead of "off," for example), and some word choices. But it's great; please continue!

The story is a lot different than I thought it would be, and I'm pleasantly surprised.Thanks for the good story.

when husband and wife agree that it's time for another one to be added to the two of them...

A beautiful story is quite rare for Literotica. Well done!

Also quite erotic. It doesn't hurt that this is a fantasy of mine. But I enjoyed reading a story that is not merely erotic.

Lucky guy. I love a woman whose eager to get knocked up by me

You're one lucky man. I would love to be in shoes if I could cater to her needs

That's the way it's done. No sissies, no cucks.

A man and his wife!

Simple, hot, and people who know where to put it. This is all I could ask for and dream about in a marriage. I second what the other reviewer said - none of that cuck or incest stuff appeals to me. Keep writing, please.

He and his wife Saoirse // Two hearts stirring to a single beat// Bodies stripped from head to feet // tumble in the sheets // soulful kisses sweet // No resistance to meet // dirty talk surfeit // blood boiling, seed release // creates a natural increase

Great story of marital love, lust and babymaking. There is something strangely erotic about flushing the birth control pills down the toilet with your wife or partner. And then inseminating her. A swelling belly is testimony to a job well done!

enjoyed it-short and sweet...

and loved the picture you painted of her body-love redheads, their pale skin, and she obliges him by keeping her firebush...LOVE women that keep it natural...