by Gee_star
Very sexy story. I would love to be Luce. Both of you are very lucky and sexy!
First time I've ever felt I was reading from the peeping Tom perspective. Just couldn't quite get into their lives (things developed to quickly). The sex was interesting enough, but sadly I felt I was peeping into their bedroom window!
firstly, regarding the previous comment, i could get into the story. i found knowing about their relationship much more arousing. being a lesbian in a commited relationship myself, i loved the characters. the story was very accurate to what we do and very sexy. my partner and i thoroughly enjoyed the story more than once, if you get my drift. judging by your explanations of everything i can tell you have been in sexual situations with women. very sexually exciting which i loved. looking forward to hearing more.
Very, very good sex scene, but, no offense, where's the story? I felt that lack keenly, but liked what was there so much that I gave it four stars.