All Comments on 'Display Wife Ch. 05'

by R_Peterson

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Very nicely tied up and very erotic little story.

I am so glad you did not turn the beautiful wife into a slut or whore to make the story. Women are erotic with ruining them and their lives. Thanks again. RB

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Good Story

I am pleased that they finally got there justice with Sam.

The story end very nicely with the wife becoming a slut.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
excellent

ending. I can really enjoy the whole story now. Far better than I hoped.

Wilson SpaldingWilson Spaldingabout 16 years ago
Nice Twist

Not exactly what I expected, but close – and done well enough that it counted as a "happy ending." Visual, visceral, emotional... nice series.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 16 years ago
Nicely done.

Good little story, and well written.

Thanks,

George & Anne

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Well Done

I really enjoyed these stories - excellent!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 14 years ago
Fantastis

Great tale, thank you.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 13 years ago
Stupid, mindless and self serving.

One of the worst !

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 13 years ago
I was preparing to hate Sam

for ruining their lives and not sharing a cent of his profits, then you turned it around, well done.

DWornockDWornockover 12 years ago
Ch 05 is an improvement over ch 04. Nevertheless, I rated it 1*.

It is such a pity that, after an outstanding and very sexy ch 1 and even ch 2, the story degenerated into a story went from being HOT to a big turn-off.

In the beginning Mark and Morgan were a nice very sexy couple, and then Mark turned from being smart to a dumb pervert that allows him to be blackmailed into a wimp that pimps out his beautiful wife for money at far less pay than what her activities would be worth on the open market.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 12 years ago
They are concerned

to hide their identities,yes? So they make love in front of an open window at home?

As I advised my daughter in her new home; put up a blind in the bathroom. It is easier to avoid becoming a stalker's victim than to try to stop it after it starts.

volescampervolescamperalmost 11 years ago
Well paced tale

Enjoyed all the series, the story held together really well and left one pleasurably anticipating the next step. Great stuff.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 10 years ago
Desi Cuck

Hot & erotic .....keep writing

ur style.....slow build up is good..... Morgan should've known the pleasure of touch from strangers

Expecting long story series

AnonymousAnonymousover 9 years ago
Talentless drivel bordering insanity !

Writer didn't take its meds !! "1*" .

DickTraceyDickTracey12 months ago

Great, awesome story

AnonymousAnonymous4 months ago

i think no i know that your story is hot i talk to my girl about doing something like that and my girl is my daughter

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