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All Comments on 'Distance is Just a Word'

by BarflyJack

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WatcherRobWatcherRobover 9 years ago
Needs some serious editing

The story is fine but needs some serious editing. Needs the appropriate use of possessive apostrophes and "she" instead of "her".

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