All Comments on 'Do You Trust Me?'

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thomas_deanthomas_deanover 3 years ago
Love Lost

This is an enchanting coming of age story about a first love, a college sweetie that did not develop into a permanent relationship. The delicacy of the story is not marred by the explanation of how the break up occurred. The writer just explains that "we went our separate ways." The story reminds me of the country western song All Summer Long by Kid Rock or the older rock song Traces of Love by The Classics IV. It's a universal story extremely well told.

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