by Kurokami
another strong chapter. Really enjoy this series, can't wait till the next installment.
I'm mainly getting down the ONLY negatives I can think of, which is to say apart from these I think its awesome. 1. Sometimes Sander talks less like he's a sophisticated intelligent ex-corporate/planetary ruler and mastermind and more like he's a teenager. Mara does it too but given her pseudo-psychotic tendencies its more justifiable. 2. This chapter in particular highlights how Amy seems to be becoming more of a fringe character. Noooooo! Lets see how it pans out in the rest of the chapters. AND the follow up series! hehe
I love reading your stories, Sir... Very talented writer you are! Makes me wish there really was a Nirvana and that i had a good escort to take me there... keep up the good work. Please don't stop..... writing, that is...lol