All Comments on 'Dominic Ch. 12'

NOW DOM IS A HOMOSEXUAL WEREWOLF? THE STORY DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE...TO WEIRD FOR ME...GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR WRITING, I AM DONE HERE.

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without any sense of how it drastically effects the flow of the story. I mean, it makes no sense that Dom is gay. Where did that come from? Was that really the storyline from the beginning?

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I think you should really do some major editing of the first 11 chapters. There's a way to make it a surprise that he's gay without it seeming to be completely random & disjointed with the rest of the story. Plus, the whole story should just be in the Sci-Fi section.

Im pissed a strong alpha is supposed to be STRAIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT POSESSIVE DOMINATE LOVING U CLEARLY DONT KNOW HOW TO RIGHT THIS STORY WAS OK NOW IT SUCKS IF I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT A FUCKIN HOMOSEXUAL I WOULD HAVE PICKED GAY MALE. I ALSO DONT LIKE HOW DOM SHARES HER. NOT THE CHARACTERISTIC OF AN ALPHA HE HAS NO PACK DOMS A BITCH.AND U OVER USE THAT WORD LIKE ELLEN ID A COMMODITY WHERE IS THE LOVE?

I meant write not right

I think the homosexuality bit is a bit over the top nothing wrong with those who love the same sex, but I agree if I wanted that I would have read that, this is extremely different from the stories I am used to when it comes to an Alpha and his mate.

err....i have to hand it to you this story is Unique. Don't get me wrong i've been reading alot of stories on literotica from gay to non-human but this type of story is a first for me.lol. Is this a love story or one about the raw carnal desire of werewolves ,the need to dominate and reproduce?