by Truth74
err....i have to hand it to you this story is Unique. Don't get me wrong i've been reading alot of stories on literotica from gay to non-human but this type of story is a first for me.lol. Is this a love story or one about the raw carnal desire of werewolves ,the need to dominate and reproduce?
I think the homosexuality bit is a bit over the top nothing wrong with those who love the same sex, but I agree if I wanted that I would have read that, this is extremely different from the stories I am used to when it comes to an Alpha and his mate.
Im pissed a strong alpha is supposed to be STRAIGHTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTTT POSESSIVE DOMINATE LOVING U CLEARLY DONT KNOW HOW TO RIGHT THIS STORY WAS OK NOW IT SUCKS IF I WANT TO KNOW ABOUT A FUCKIN HOMOSEXUAL I WOULD HAVE PICKED GAY MALE. I ALSO DONT LIKE HOW DOM SHARES HER. NOT THE CHARACTERISTIC OF AN ALPHA HE HAS NO PACK DOMS A BITCH.AND U OVER USE THAT WORD LIKE ELLEN ID A COMMODITY WHERE IS THE LOVE?
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without any sense of how it drastically effects the flow of the story. I mean, it makes no sense that Dom is gay. Where did that come from? Was that really the storyline from the beginning?
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I think you should really do some major editing of the first 11 chapters. There's a way to make it a surprise that he's gay without it seeming to be completely random & disjointed with the rest of the story. Plus, the whole story should just be in the Sci-Fi section.
NOW DOM IS A HOMOSEXUAL WEREWOLF? THE STORY DOESN'T MAKE ANY SENSE...TO WEIRD FOR ME...GOOD LUCK WITH YOUR WRITING, I AM DONE HERE.