All Comments on 'Donald and Mallory'

This is pretty sad, didn't quite understand story, who the fuck are these people, actually I don't care.

These folks do not sound sexy, just disgusting.

You're sick, get help as fast as possible. If this is your best I suggest you give it up and stop writing, you are not a writer.

Probably more real than not... Very hot!

Is this the same idiot that wrote that interview with himself? Why is Literotica the collection place of all the rejects from all the other sites?

Why are these people still married?

There is no plot, no ertoica, no feelings, no love, no emotions, just fuck me and get it over. The marriage is a farce with no place to go. He wont divorce her, she wont divorce him. Neither is strong enough to stand on their own. They have no love or feelings for each other, just roommates sharing bodily fluids sometimes that raise each ones chance of STD or AIDS infection. Remember folks, if they cheat with you, they cheat on you with others.

My wife and I enjoyed it. :-)