by birch0402
Dude, good story but it woulda been better if you invited over 20 of your friends to bang her in the ass!
Why don't you guys go hang out at the incest/taboo section? You should get a REAL kick being outraged by those stories - obviously the thing that gets YOU people off...
I usually don't leave comments, but this time the hateful remark left by someone else leaves me little choice.
It's fantasy, not reality. If you can't tell the difference and feel the need to attack the writer the way you did in your public comment, then YOU my friend, ARE the dangerous psycho...
Liked the idea of the story. The writing and plot-outline still leave room for improvement however.
NonConcent... means just that... against her will. If you dont want to read NONCONSENTUAL stories then choose another catagory or at least study the dictionary a little bit.
an explanation of what NC/R means in the first paragraph of your stories for the morons who think it is a story about children playing.