All Comments on 'Doris' Itch Ch. 04'

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Ian SinclairIan Sinclairover 18 years ago
What a great erotic story!

This is the kind of story this site should excel at, but rarely does.

Usually there is a short 'fuckfest' in the 1st few words, no seduction, and amaturishly written. This is soooo different. There is warmth in all the relationships. Doris dilemma in making love to her sons - but very beleivable and passionate. As for her lesbian experience with Helen, god, that was hot! Again, excellent expansion of scene and location. Explicit description of sex retaining all the ertocism to maintain your interest.....

A brilliant story by a talented writer - whatever next!

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
good

that was ok but get back to the boys,Tody and Andy need you and what about mike he need to get in the action.

David48David48over 18 years ago
Deeeeepraaaaaved

Talk about diversion. Lesbian sex, at least in my mind, seems, most times, to be sedate next to man/woman sex. Not here! Jeez Louise, they damn near beat each other to damn death, force feeding each other the same monster silicon cock. Damn! I'm always shocked by the depravity some authors exhibit in there stories on this site. IF THEY'RE ANY DAMN GOOD that is. This author...is VERY good.

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
GREAT

CAN WAIT FOR YOUR NEXT CH 5 MIKE GET INTO THE ACTION

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
great

coming on give us ch 5,mike need some action.

AnonymousAnonymousover 17 years ago
OMG

That was awesome. I dont need to hear from Mike

AnonymousAnonymousover 15 years ago
Wow. Phew. Mmmm.

That really got me going. Had ideas of lingerie for years and now I'll try it out with the girls.

YoungStud23YoungStud23about 13 years ago
lesbian scene

I'm not really into reading lesbian stuff, but this (considering the storyline) is a wonderful twist from the standard mature woman incest/taboo content. I loved it! 42DD's!! :-P

adidasgaladidasgalover 10 years ago
SAD!

OMFG! Everybody has a right to their fantasies but this is so damn GROSS!!

"I've always had this FANTASY TO BE RAPED, i never imagined it would be by a woman, and i never imagined I WOULD BE ENJOYING it either"

ARE YOU FOR REAL? OMFG! I suggest you choose your words carefully or keep fantasies like this to yourself. RAPE is ugly and to use it so lightly, is disrespectful to any rape survivor and to those who succumbed, because of it.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This chapter totally not needed. After years of sex once a month she now has two young studs who an fuck her multiple times. Bring Mike into the mix and they can all fuck her senseless all week when Ian is away. You could raise a billboard with the words "Doris has 42DD tits" on it so we don't forget.lol

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