All Comments on 'Double Life Ch. 03'

by Julie20

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jpalsgrjpalsgrover 12 years ago
Excellent

Excellent, your creating a story line for a very entertaining tale. Keep it up.

darklacedarklaceover 12 years ago
Brilliant!

You've taken the classic blackmail scenario and turned it completely on its ear! Your stories are rare gems, Julie20.

Nitro70652Nitro70652over 12 years ago
Amazing

I find it amazing that anyone could formulate such a plan for this young woman, using her own needs against her. And as luck would have it, she followed their plan blindly... not knowing what would befall her. Totally believable though. As always, great story telling.

5 stars again.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

This story "jumps the shark" at this point. When a blackmail victim has nothing to loose (as in this case her husband knows all about it) the blackmailer has no further hold over their victim.

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