All Comments on 'Doug and Diane'

by MacSwain612

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stvkomodostvkomodoover 14 years ago
can't wait for chapter 2

How can you be so cruel to stop right there?

please put up the rest of the story.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Intersting dialog

Quite an intriguing story.

Great buildup to the first step.

Please use your spell check. wear should be where.

It detracts from the story.

I'm looking for the sequences.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
grrrrrrrrrr,

Damn,great start to the story. made me hard and wanting to try it too. please please put up rest of the story..

A+++ effort so far........

MacSwain612MacSwain612over 14 years agoAuthor
Thanks for the support

I'm working on it. Keep checking back

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Great Start

Loved the start, just hated where it ended!! Finish it, Please!!

hotladyvanessahotladyvanessaabout 13 years ago
More, PLEASE!

This story should have a pt. 2. Keep up the good work!

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