by hotturkey
It's soooo fucking good!!! I can totally feel their yearning for each other.
Could've used names rather than simple labels.
It was quite long to get to the part that I'm sure we all were reading for and a bit more imagery would've done better.
It was a decent story to pass the time.
Thoroughly enjoyed it. Thank you.
Comment about using proper names as identifiers - unnecessary nit-picking, immediately understandable nomenclature.
This story was a great build and very exciting; I just wish it ended telling me what happened with dragon & unicorn, like more sex, having a family... living happily ever after.