All Comments on 'Dragon Clans Bk. 01 Pt. 06'

Your chapters are too short and the pain of waiting for the plot to hatch is painful.

It seems each time I read one of these chapters, I end up crying. Once again you have written an amazing chapter. It's getting more and more interesting and things are slowly starting to unravel here. Your writing is absolutely amazing. I'm really looking forward to the next part. Thank you, this chapter was awesome.

Enjoying this a lot, but would love to be able to read more of it at one sitting. You're doing well with character development though, go for it!

Another protagonist that faints all the time...

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