All Comments on 'Dream Come True Ch. 02'

by 2CHaNces

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missingmissmissingmissover 14 years ago
no errors. i think?

and keep on going with this sweet story.

lovely1974lovely1974over 14 years ago
A great start!

I really like this story! And I'm particularly fond of Taryn. She's a character that many people, my self included, can surely relate to. Keep writing. You've definitely piqued my interest.

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
Thanks for continuing the story

I am looking forward to reading more.

grunabonagrunabonaover 14 years ago
*****

Excellent. You are very talented, 2CHaNces. A natural born writer, it appears.

Loved the dialogue, especially between Taryn and her brothers.

AnonymousAnonymousabout 14 years ago
Love it!

I can't wait for you to continue! Great story!

Alpha_MarmAlpha_Marmalmost 11 years ago
Intriguing

This is mysterious and funny and a whole bunch of other things a love

story should have. I never have an issue with length of first chapters, but

you are teasing. Like Cydney's following his feelings. So many men back

away in instances where opportunity presents itself.

This is why I love fiction..... anything is possible.

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