by parawa
Although the least sexual of all the chapters, I think I loved this one all the more for it. The characters became so much more defined and human. Their playfulness, the affection, and a hint of the true nature of Fred and Colette's relationship all came together and added more color and dimension to an already polished story. I'm doing my best to not view the tunnel as some kind of metaphor...
This whole story was very well written and captivating. Even if no sex were included it would have been intriguing - but the sex makes it a whole lot more fun! It seems, however, that there is more to come, questions to be answered, a more satisfying ending. Just as in "O Later", there seems to be more to be said...I shall wait for it with eagerness!
As a history buff as well as a Dom, you're pushing ALL of my buttons. Awaiting the next chapter with bated breath.