All Comments on 'Dual Shudder'

Again, quite wonderful - this was a great chapter. Please keep going, I like the concept and your development.

I also enjoy your play on "Pi Beta Phi"...at least at my school, they would definitely be the sorority it would happen to ;]

I very much liked the erotic haunted mansion theme of the first story and this one does a great job of spreading the fun around. Those blue sigils make for some great imagery and I kept thinking Zarina would be sporting one in no time. Yet she held out quite admirably, I really liked how she could say no even when she'd lost all conviction. The mind shattering was harsh though.