All Comments on 'Dual Submissions Ch. 03'

by The_Mercyslayer

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AnonymousAnonymousover 5 years ago
That went right in the crapper

Didn't see it coming that the "Master" was no Master at all, just a common thug without honor and a flair for the dramatic. Was somewhat enjoyable up until he turned on his employer. Lost any interest if there will ever be another chapter...

AnonymousAnonymousover 4 years ago

Terrible ending, fucking asshole turned on his employer. What happened to Thomas was sick and disgusting.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 4 years ago
Waste of time

reading this. Very bad very ugly story. Someday Thomas will wake up and get a gun-and start blowing peoples brains all over the place. Just wait and see.

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 2 years ago

First 2 chapters were great. Not a fan of what happened to Thomas.

AnonymousAnonymousover 1 year ago

loved what happind to thomas, wish i was him

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