All Comments on 'Dungeon Fantasies'

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AnonymousAnonymousabout 2 years ago

Loved it! Reminds me of Animagus

AnonymousAnonymousover 18 years ago
weird

I'm not sure why you are adding the metamorphosis. The story is way too confusing with that aspect. I think the story could stand by itself without that touch. Or add the metamorphosis without the dungeon. This is a clash of two different scenarios.

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