All Comments on 'Dustin's Wife Ch. 02'

Author...you have gone where many other writers have gone...too far overboard that a reconciliation at all cost becomes unbelievable.

Unless Vicki leaves Dustin and lives with or marries Andy or Mike...there is no love story within this story...only if Dustin is a cukold and loves the new Vicki can I see a reconciliation...but that's not my genre.

Furthermore since you said there ar 5 chapters...I will hold off reading the remainder until I read all three. Then I can better comment on the overall story.

'nuff said.

Andy

good job, looking forward to read more!!!!!

Is Vickie ever going to get bred by you guys?

way too much that it become unbelievable, a slower built up to be the slut could be better, from shy housewife to slut in just a cock suck,,,,,just can;t see that happening.

Where do these fucked up stories come from? Out of your ass!!!!!

OK. Ass to Mouth is distasteful! It is usually resisted by the 'catcher' and coerced by the 'pitcher!' Any demonstration of power (whether catcher is male or female) is part of erotica, as is the 'forbidden' aspect. But :

A2M is massively unhealthy, now potentially FATAL! So, forget about bad breath. Consider funeral! I would urge LIT to reject stories, even in Anal, unless stories with that aspect are eliminated or modified to address this dilemma!

Yeah, I KNOW it is fiction! But, anyone who believes fiction is not influential is kidding him/herself.

This series is hot (with the exception of the A2M mentioned above)! Sweetie is conflicted ... Not 50-50 conflicted ... maybe more like 70-30 - on the positive side, her rebellion against her Hubby's Total Asshole personality and possessiveness, plus getting satisfying sex from intense partners! On the smaller negative side, the societal norms, probably learned on her Mommy's lap! That tension lets AlParker's Depraved Duo be brutally direct against her bullshit protestations, thus her surrenders become even sweeter - certainly for the reader, and probably for this delightful character!

4*. If the ratings were open!

I am a bi male. I love getting screwed in my ass while sucking cock. I have done A2M a couple of times. I don't make a habit of it but if I clean out before sex it is not disgusting and does not taste like shit. Some guys like, it most do not. Some people here talk about things they know nothing about. If you have not tried it don't criticize. If you don't like the subject, don't read the story. Don't push your likes and dislikes on others.