All Comments on 'Duty-Bound'

It seems to have been inspired by the Tom Cruise - Nicole Kidman flick "Eyes Wide Shut", but not bad. It just did not raise my temperature as much as it could have.

I enjoyed this story. They continued fucking until sunlight...I want to know more about what they did. Good job - it's all in the details.

Great build but more details about the sex were required. Fabulous writing!

For a first submission I thought this was a good story. It was a little wordy in the beginning, but I am soooooooo guilty of wordy, I'm like the wordy champion or close to it. I do, however agree it needed more detail for the sexual episodes.

I was very excited when he walked into that room and saw her. I felt a tingle.*wink*

I hope you keep writing. Detail is good... but dialog is as well. You'll find your happy medium in time. All in all... a great read and I enjoyed it very much.

Thanks for writing it and sharing it.

I never saw "Eyes Wide Shut. . .or Open. . .or partially glaze. ;)" But this was a great first story and I look forward to more.

~ Red

This writer has talent to write a cohesive story with a realistic plot. Excellent start to what could easily be a series.