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AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago
"Special thanks to Brandon for editing this story."

Perhaps whilst editing it he should also have a) proof read it and b) corrected the numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation errors!!

AnonymousAnonymousalmost 11 years ago

I agree with this comment.

"Special thanks to Brandon for editing this story."

Perhaps whilst editing it he should also have a) proof read it and b) corrected the numerous spelling, grammar and punctuation errors!!

JensensloverJensensloveralmost 11 years ago

This was the revised version? I'd hate to have read the original version. You need a new editor.

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