All Comments on 'Early Morning Waterfall'

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nyminusnyminusover 14 years ago
I almost felt like I was evesdroping

Tell me that non slut/wimp stories can't get you up

digdaddyrichdigdaddyrichover 14 years ago
very good

well written and very erotic, just enough sex to make it interesting. Thanks ......Rich

AnonymousAnonymousover 14 years ago
this is proof that sincerity is sexy

sex is hotter in love, sex stories are hotter when they're honest and unpretentious- great combination, good story. "Howl at the moon" might've been a bit corny for my taste, especially repeated thrice.

Otherwise, enjoyed it much.

PrincessErinPrincessErinover 14 years ago
Wonderful

Really enjoyed reading this story. Good luck in the contest.

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