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To be continued...
- COMMENTS
sarahhhabout 16 years agodis storey. I resent the remark from the anonymous who said, "One should notice the only laudatory comments BFD gets are themselves illiterate. That tells you something about BFD’s readers and his work. That his stories only appeal to illiterates would be devastating to anyone else, but BFD doesn’t even notice." I happen to like BFW's work. He is quite the amusing fellow, and I do like my fancy tickled. You trolls should stick to reading used toilet paper.
drksideofthemoonabout 16 years agoI have no idea where Moondrift came from, but it's certainly not me. BFW, you need to quit writing all of your own comments on your stories. You're only embarassing yourself even more.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoDSM may b a closet queen but he sure-as-hell doesn't deserve to b a prom queen. He reminds me more of 1 of Cinderella's ugly step-sisters or maybe Gus-Gus. He was the mouse w/a fat ASS that helped Cinderella dress.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoI start off by saying this is a very good story by BFW,and so it is,it is also very erotic.I just so happen to have american Indian ancestors.But no along comes chief big basher and insults all and sundry,we go on the warpath we have had enough of this maniac.So hopefully you have poured oil on the troubled waters[Iknow you are hot really heap big chief of Literotica] We will stop this,if anzac moon admits it,otherwise he had better form a circle??????
Anonymousabout 16 years agoThis constant infighting is taking attention away from the fact that there is a whole lot of hot Injun sex in this story. It's heap big fun for us lovers of Native American Nookie, so why don't you all go smoke-um peace pipe and enjoy the sex, written by the Chief of Literotica?
* and I mean that with all due respect to everyone.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoWith the last comment,someone said you write under another name and have won many competitions,so has Moondrift,now surely you must know who the competion is.Right or Wrong,the jury awaits and so does the prosecution your answer.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoDarkside look in the mirror and you will see him,you are even crazier than I thought,lets see what we can do with Interpol.Make the most of your last few days or it could be hours of freedom
Anonymousabout 16 years agoDid you get my email? I've off to vote on the rest of your stories now.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoBy you inane comment that I left a letter in english out,now piss off or rather fuck off,when an englishman says that fucking watch out.
Anonymousabout 16 years agoAs I found Darkside[alias Moondrift]I have found you,the person who refers to BFW as BFD..Your contact e mail is invalid.
VULCAN4231about 16 years agoHow dare you refer to all that like BFW AS ILLITERATE,my father who was an officer in the second world war hated American bastards like you more than he hated the Germans,in fact in this country you Americans are a big joke.Now give me an Email address that I can contact you,you gutless swine,I was educated at a real Engish grammar school and do not speak bastardised english like you .
Anonymousabout 16 years agoPoor BFD hasn't figured out yet what is going wrong with his life yet. He thinks because he styles himself as big and strong (in one of his whiny posts defending himself), that everyone should just stop criticizing these crappy stories. He hasn't even figured out why I call him BFD yet. LOL He hasn't figured out why even if I sign this with my login, I'm STILL equally anonymous with anyone just using the "Anonymous From ..." moniker. Some people just don't get it, and I don't think they ever will. </p>
One should notice the only laudatory comments BFD gets are themselves illiterate. That tells you something about BFD’s readers and his work. That his stories only appeal to illiterates would be devastating to anyone else, but BFD doesn’t even notice. </p>
Well, so this mini-chapter is better than the previous seven. That’s like saying one pile of excrement is “better” than the previous seven one has laid down. I think BFD would be well advised to memorize Dark’s commentary and learn from it. But, the big, tough BFD (I can’t keep a straight face writing that--LOL) won’t learn. I think he’s incapable of learning because he simply can’t process information properly. After all, this is the writer who bragged about having already been published, but it turned out he’d paid the publisher to do the publishing. LOL </p>
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