by seaspirit
Lets have lots more of John's coming of age, very sexy writing.Will check the site everyday for more of the same.Great.
This story is very hot, but I would like to see more seduction. You develop characters well and have a good story here. Instead of these ladies giving thmselves to John, seduce him. Make him beg for a glimpse, a touch, a sexual encounter. Meanwhile let the ladies have theor way with him. Make him their boy toy.