by seaspirit
This story is very hot, but I would like to see more seduction. You develop characters well and have a good story here. Instead of these ladies giving thmselves to John, seduce him. Make him beg for a glimpse, a touch, a sexual encounter. Meanwhile let the ladies have theor way with him. Make him their boy toy.
Lets have lots more of John's coming of age, very sexy writing.Will check the site everyday for more of the same.Great.