All Comments on 'Elizabeth's Roman Awakening Ch. 04'

Nothing new here except for the setting in Italy. Your story has been done before with almost no variance. You are either a white masochist, a black man with numerous fantasies and an inferiority complex, or a white woman with wishful thinking.

so does Coca-Cola, don't mess with perfection. Remember New Coke?

Yeah, I LIKE the formula! It's a little different than the other stories though, so it's got a fresh experience to it. Keep it up, but don't forget about Stevie in Dark Horizons!

This formula always results in the same answer: 1*.

Story needs to add strong willed African woman to domesticate Elizabeth with a touch of discipline into a submissive respectable woman to all black males. Hubby can be turned into manservant totally ignored and forgotten by Queen Elizabeth who will be a breeder of strong African males.

To be spanked by a black bitch before being fucked will be an enormous turn on for Elizabeth.

Does every black man portrayed in these stories have no respect for another's marriage and is only motivated by his penis? Does every white woman portrayed in these stories have no respect for marriage or her husband? Pathetic drivel to be sure. This formula as another put it ends the same for me. 1*

i would have preferred that the husband surrenders to his cuckold destiny through slow but precise manipulations by Elizabeth and Joseph. Otherwise congratulations. Keep up your good work!

Please don't keep a long gap as that impacts the continuity for us.

When's the next chapter? Let us know when we can expect it.