All Comments on 'Elle Ch. 01'

Please don't leave it too long before submitting Part 2. I can't wait to find out what is in the box. What can possibly be so scary? Great story so far!

Please don't take too long with the next chapter! Teasing is mean, you know. ;)

Utterly fabulous- love the depth and lucidity of description, can't wait to read the next chapter :-)

Great use of words and description in the first half. I especially loved the 'English muffin' nickname. Keep the great writing up, and keep it unique. Thank you for posting it!

Thank you for leaving some great comments! The full version of "Elle" will be published next year by eXcessica, but I am very encouraged by the lovely comments, both public and private, that I have recieved for this story. I am currently writing my second novella, so I hope to have this on Lit quite soon!

Amber

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has this treasure read been hiding? Hope the rest of this short series lives up to this beautifully written sensuous beginning. Thanks...

interesting,start. i would have liked more detail as to how she left her original relationship and became his sub. other than that, great start!

No safeword....why am I not surprised a Doctor has a god complex.

By revoking her right to a safeword the scene fails on the Safe and Sane aspects.